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I Committed For You... by ~Keego-Cat:iconKeego-Cat:



I see you through the open door…
Blood pouring down your back,
I know what has happened.

If we do this together like we really should
Life won’t be as lonely, as it probably would

Why did you have to use that knife?
To take away, such a lovely life.

Blossoming out of a beautiful girl
So true, and new to the world

You killed her, I saw you, too
That’s why I think I saw you cry

I feel I don’t know you; you were such a nice guy
But now with your hands and cuffs, I’m almost glad to see you die.

You didn’t mean it, I know you better
That’s why I’m coming in after you.

An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth,
Those were once the laws of truth

Friends stick together,
Through the flames

I know this doesn’t really apply to me,
But I feel this sense of irony

You got lucky, son of a bitch
This won’t be you’re problem again, it will be my own

Looming above me, from time to time
When I choose to do this crime

Anger floods me, almost like my freshly renewed blood
I loved you and I hope you enjoy what I have done.

I never felt the pain I should
But that was because I was already to you,
in your freed arms,
dancing, once again.
©2009 ~Keego-Cat
:iconkeego-cat:

Author's Comments

This isn't my best I just wanted to put this up, don't laugh at me. D:


Yeah, I'm not even thinking this way.
This is what happens when you listen to Leaving Hope too much.

It's about a young girl, who's boyfriend kills another girl. The girl feels almost responsible, and she wants to be with her lover, so she kills herself.
She never felt the pain, she went straight to dancing in his freed arms.

Disclaimer: KEEGO IS NOT SUICIDAL

Poem (c) Keego-Cat
1/26/09

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:iconaqua--dragon:
T-this...is beautfiful...:heart:

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:star::bulletwhite::bulletyellow::bulletpink::star:
I want to reach beyond the stars....
and touch the moon...
:iconkeego-cat:
Thank you so much! :heart:

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I :heart: Ray Allen
[link]
Ray Allen makes good girls go BAD.
:iconsiiyukatsu:
That IS beautiful ;_;

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OH NO. A ZOMBIE IS EATING A PERSONS HEAD ON THIS PICTURE! LOOK! [link]
:iconkeego-cat:
Thank you so much, and for the fav. It means so much to me. c:

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I :heart: Ray Allen
[link]
Ray Allen makes good girls go BAD.
:iconsiiyukatsu:
<3

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OH NO. A ZOMBIE IS EATING A PERSONS HEAD ON THIS PICTURE! LOOK! [link]
:iconrosesagerosebud:
ohmygod
this is fabulous but..
IM WORRIED ABOUT U NOW!

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live-laugh-love
::heart::

BOOTH: Is this some kind of a sex thing?

BRENNAN: How’d you get there so quickly?

BOOTH: The man said ‘fantasy’, I just made the leap.
:iconkeego-cat:
XDDDDD
Wow, don't worry I was just bored.

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I :heart: Ray Allen
[link]
Ray Allen makes good girls go BAD.
:iconrosesagerosebud:
:))

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live-laugh-love
::heart::

BOOTH: Is this some kind of a sex thing?

BRENNAN: How’d you get there so quickly?

BOOTH: The man said ‘fantasy’, I just made the leap.
:iconpulsedrive:
EEEP I SMELL INSPIRATION!
...and blood....but, that's just me x3

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"It didn't sound like a bird getting shot, it sounded like a bird getting shot by a nuclear BOMB!"
~ Zee assistant band director! xD

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